[DitV] A few questions from a new GM.
SAW:
Quote from: lumpley on July 16, 2009, 10:44:04 AM
It's a very good town.
You'll want to add another few NPCs. Abigail's mother, for instance, her father, a couple more boys in the cult, their families. What do they want?
I strongly recommend that you start off with a town that goes all the way to hate and murder. This would make a good second town, and an excellent third town - as good a third town as I've ever seen.
-Vincent
Yeah, I realized about the need for more NPCs. Abigial's adopted parents, definitely. As well as some more of the boys and their families. Maybe a family that's sort of lost some prestige and wants their son to succeed to get a leg up.
And I originally took this one to Hate & Murder, with Abigail not letting her spirit be broken and then Jacob sending his gang after her and blaming it on the Mountain People. But then I thought it might be interesting if the reason Abigial's spirit isn't broken is because the Dog's show up, and are therefore sort of the cause of Abigail's murder.
Though, I suppose instead of Abigial being the original murder victim, it could be her adopted father who gets offed first, and then the Dog's show up and have to sort things out before Jacob can get to Abigail as well.
I guess it surprises me that going all the way to Hate & Murder is actually better for first towns. My initial reaction is to want to start off small. But I'll definitely bump it up!
Thanks a bunch for the advise.
SAW:
Here we go. I added in Hate & Murder, and brought in 4 more NPCs, which also really expanded on the seedy under-pinnings of the plot, I think.
Thanks for the input! Would either of you mind taking a quick look at this Town I wrote up? This is the other thing I'm definitely shakey on, and would really appreciate some advise on.
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Sanctuary Valley
PRIDE: Sister Abigail is a young girl who wants to be a Dog, a daughter of two deceased Dog's herself. Unfortunately, this pushes her out of her proper role as a young woman--she rebuffs suitors while attempting to learn to ride and shoot in preparation for her eventual elevation.
Brother Marcus, the town Steward, is set that his son (Brother Jacob) is going to be one the greatest Dog's the Faith has ever known.
INJUSTICE: Sister Abigail pretty much manages to outshine the boys her age when it comes to most everything she tries to accomplish. This puts the boys in a bad light as the families and the older boys expect them to be able to beat a girl.
On top of this, the Steward won't support Abigail's desire to become a Dog because he wants his son to be one--unfortunately, Abigail manages to best Jacob at just about everything Dog-related.
SIN: Jacob decides that he is simply going to end the competition on his own terms by knocking Abigial out of it all together. He gathers the other powers and they rig a horse's saddle to bust during a jumping contest, which sends the girl into a hard fall.
DEMONIC ATTACK: The demons have their way in with Jacob's gang at this point and use it to sabotage -them- in return, allowing the injured Sister Abigail to continue to out do them. The demons want to push the boys and their families to the brink. It also makes Abigail look like some sort of sorcerer.
FALSE DOCTRINE: Jacob leads his gang in the belief that no woman should naturally be as capable as a man, and that the King of Life would never -really- want a woman to be his Dog.
CORRUPT WORSHIP: Jacob and his gang begin praying to save themselves from Sister Abigail and her demon possession, to weaken her and destroy her, preferably by Jacob's hand.
FALSE PRIESTHOOD: Jacob, leading the gang in this, creates a cult and becomes a Sorcerer himself.
SORCERY: Jacob uses his sorcery to cause other accidents to befall Abigail and her adopted family, hoping to break her spirit.
HATE & MURDER: When her families hardships only seem to make the girl work harder to keep them afloat, Jacob lashes out, seeking to break their family's back--by killing her father. Without her father, the family can't survive without Abigial being married to someone able to take care of them, a role which Jacob just happens to be willing to fill.
This is when the Dog's come in
WHAT PEOPLE WANT?
SISTER ABIGAIL: She wants the Dog's to send her off to Bridal Falls with their blessings to become a Dog herself. She also wants the Dogs to find a way to keep her adopted mother from being ruined by her father's recent death.
SISTER MADELINE: She wants to see her daughter suceed. Sister Madeline was a friend of Abigail's mother, and when both her and Abigail's father died protecting a neighboring town from bandits, she took it upon herself to raise the girl as her own. And now that her husband has been murdered, she would also like the Dog's to guide her in what the King has planned for her survival.
BROTHER MARCUS: He believes the bad things that have begun to happen to Abigail are punishment for her continuing pride. He wants the Dogs to side with him, but beyond that, he wants them to praise his son and encourage him to be sent off to Bridal Falls, removing any traces of favoritism from the decision he would make on his own as Steward.
BROTHER JACOB: He wants Abigail broken, much like a horse. He wants the Dogs to shatter her dreams of becoming one of them and, in fact, persuade her to marry him--to supposedly ease the bad blood created in town, but in reality, he just wants to be completely above her.
BROTHER SAMUEL: Jacob's younger brother and a hesitant member of his cult. Samuel just wants his "old" brother back.
BROTHER ETHAN: Ethan is Jacob's right-hand man. He's an older boy, but he's not very compotent and wasn't very well-liked. When he saw a chance to step into the spot-light, he took it, joining Jacob's cause with very little prompting. He wants to protect Jacob to protect his own good fortune, and so he either wants the Dogs to see Abigail as a sorcerer and "free" her from demonic control, or to simply leave.
BROTHER NICHOLAS: Nicholas is the father of Ethan, and like father, like son. When Abigail's father was killed 10 years ago, he carefully watched who he thought would gain the Stewardship and fell to supporting them as quickly as he could. Despite his service to Marcus, his family is only mildly influential due to the respect still given to Madeline and her now late husband. Nicholas wants the Dogs to judge Abigail unfavorably, as that will reflect upon Madeline, but at the same time, he also wants the Dogs to encourage her--now without a husband--to marry him, so that his influence will be that much better cemented.
CAPTAIN REYNOLDS: Captain Reynolds is a middle-aged member of the Territorial Authority but not a member of the Faith. He feels heavily responsible for the death of Abigail's parents, as it was him who requested their aid in the situation that got them both killed. He wants the Dog's to set right the wrong he's done by giving Marcus a path to Stewardship, as he believes if Abigail's real father was still alive, that this town would still be a sanctuary.
WHAT DEMONS WANT? The demons have a couple things they wouldn't mind. First, they wouldn't mind if the Dogs encouraged Abigail and sent her off to Bridal Falls instead of Jacob, as this would push the boy over the edge.
Second, if they break Abigail's spirit and force her to marry Jacob, she'll likely commit suicide or he'll kill her in short order, leading to all sorts of bad things happening after that.
WHAT IF THE DOGS NEVER CAME? If the Dog's never came, Abigail would likely have been killed, either from her broken spirit, or through Jacob sending his possessed gang to murder her. This would then leave Jacob at the top, and soon being a Dog simply wouldn't be enough, and the boy would attempt to simply take the town over and raise himself up as its leader.
cra2:
I'm confused about a couple of things re: your town.
1) I don't get the role of Capt Reynolds. What is he doing about the mounting problem? What's the situation that got "them both killed?" And why does he want to give Marcus a path to stewardship if Marcus is already the town's Steward?
2) Seems like the demons' motives are muddy. If the dogs do X - the demons are happy. If the dogs do Y - the demons are happy. And in either case, the events that will transpire will happen after the Dogs are gone and think they've solved the problems, no? If they send Abigail off to become a Dog, Jacob snears under his breath, the Dogs leave, and then Jacob starts slowly exacting his revenge. If they break her spirit, she sobs but accepts the WILL of the Faith and submits. The Dogs leave and a year or so later, unable to accept her fate, Abigail kills herself.
lumpley:
I meant to get back to this town. Thanks for reminding me!
It's true, Captain Reynolds is odd, since he doesn't appear in the progression. SAW, If you have him connected solidly to the rest of the in your mind, though, that's all you need.
I wouldn't worry about whether the demons want consistent things. It's not like Jacob's going to live through this anyway. I got a fiver says he doesn't.
ESPECIALLY if any of the PC Dogs are women.
-Vincent
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