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voidgere:
I have been an observer of this site for some time now.  Only recently have I had enough material, I feel, to post here and get some reviews.  I have about half the book compiled into PDF at the moment on my website with the rest going up as soon as I can get them put together.  With all the hard work I see other people putting in to their games, I wanted to give back to a community that has given me some great insight into my own project.

I have been working on this game for almost 4 years (as of August).  I have completed 2 stages of play testing and setting up for the third and final stage.  Visit my website and tell me what you think.

http://www.arsarcanumrpg.phpnet.us

John Michael Crovis:
Perhaps, to better entice people to try out your gaming system, you should make the download more prominent on your website. I could not find the PDF.

voidgere:
I removed the sign up requirement for viewing downloads.

John Michael Crovis:
Quote from: voidgere on July 02, 2011, 10:05:06 AM

I removed the sign up requirement for viewing downloads.


Cool... I just opened the first PDF and I already see that a lot of work has gone into this game. I'll take some time today and read through the game, giving a good analysis either this evening or tomorrow. Is there anything in particular you would like me to look for? Any particular design questions?

If you have the time, I would also appreciate it if you took a look at my own game - SYNERGY. A thread is already posted in the Game Development section, so I won't go into further detail here. This is YOUR thread, after all... :-)

voidgere:
Nothing in particular, no.  I would like you to keep in mind that it is currently under heavy scrutiny by my editor/friend.  He is mostly looking at grammar, spelling, information flow and the such.  So mechanics and systems will stay the same, but already the first and second chapters have an entirely different feel and flow.  I will try to compile and upload the updated version as soon as possible.

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