Antigone at Thebes
Ben Lehman:
I'm working on a game called Antigone at Thebes based on a play by Sophocles that doesn't actually exist. The play takes place after the events of Oedipus at Colonus, but before the events of Antigone and is about Antigone's decisions around her brother, Polyneices', attack on Thebes to reclaim the Theban throne.
The game is both jeepform and fanfiction.
I'm trying to bring jeepform out of the realm of tawdry emotion and into history, literary criticism, and post-modernism.
The fanfiction bit is just that I really, really love Sophocles.
The game comes in three stages and nine scenes. The primary character of the game is the play itself.
Stage one: Athenian
Stage two: Elizabethan
Stage Three: Modern
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--Ben
Ben Lehman:
Stage one: Athenian
Background: It helps if everyone at the table is familiar with the Theban plays, or at least the play Antigone. In case you're not, though, here's the one minute summary: At prince Oedipus's birth it is prophecied that he will kill his father and marry his mother. Horrified, his parents left him to die. Of course, he was adopted by shepherds and grew up to become a hero. He kills his father, Laius, during a skirmish on the road, and frees the city of Thebes from the grasp of a monster, winning as reward the hand of the supernaturally beautiful and eternally young queen Jocasta. They had four children: Antigone, Ismene, Polyneices and Eteocles. In Oedipus the King, Oedipus discovers his incest, Jocasta kills herself, and he goes into exile, accompanied by his daughter Antigone. In Oedipus at Colonus, he dies in Athens and Antigone returns to Thebes to deal with the upcoming Theban Civil War.
Foreground: After this play, the Theban Civil War will be fought. Polyneices and Eteocles will kill each other. Creon, now the king by default, will order that Eteocles be buried with ceremony but that Polyneices be left unburied to become a shade. Antigone, under cover of night, will bury her brother. Outraged, and not knowing that the criminal is his soon-to-be daughter-in-law, Creon will order the criminal killed, ultimately resulting in the death of both Antigone and his own son, Haemon.
Relationships: Incest themes run heavy through the Theban plays, and this one is no exception. Oedipus's children form two very close couples: Antigone and Polynieces and Ismene and Eteocles. It is unclear whether their relationship is actually sexual or just intensely, inappropriately intimate. At the time of the play, Eteocles rules a usurped throne of Thebes (it should be Polynieces') and Creon waits in the wings, hoping for a chance to seize the throne. Creon's son Haemon is interested in Antigone, but they are not yet engaged.
Tone and Style: Greek drama obeys the three unities, which I believe are Unity of Space, Unity of Time, and Unity of Character. Basically, they occur in a single long "take," without changing scenes. One character, who is the focus of the play, is on stage the entire time. Events offstage can occur, but only in real time, and are reported by the chorus or other characters, rather than directly observed. The purpose of this structure is that we get inside of this one character's skull at a crucial moment of their life, understanding only what they understand, struggling with what they struggle with.
Some greek plays involve special effects, gods, and monsters, but the plays of Sophocles do not. They have no combat, no supernatural element, and little patriotic jingoism. Rather, they are wholly focused on constructing and deconstructing the morals, choices, and pathos of a particular individual: In this case, Antigone.
Ben Lehman:
The Chorus: The chorus in the play is made up of the women of Thebes, begging Antigone to do all she can to prevent a war.
The ending: The play will end with Antigone trying and failing, or choosing not to, prevent a war, and with her being delivered the news that both of her brothers are dead.
The structure: The play will have a number of people, perhaps in different arrangements, approach Antigone to try to persuade her of their viewpoints. Choose and play three such sections, then play the ending.
Required characters:
Antigone
A Chorus of Theban Women
Possible Characters:
Ismene
Eteocles
Polyneices, in disguise, visiting his sister
Creon: A noble of Thebes
Haemon: Creon's son, in love with Antigone
Tiresius: Blind prophet of Thebes
A Maidservant
See character sheets for details about each character, their wants and needs.
Ben Lehman:
Stage two: Elizabethan
In this stage, we play out a few scenes from an Elizabethan revision of the play, adapted for the stage and customs of the time. Since the play is not about British history, it will not be a "historical" play. Rather, it will be either a tragedy or a comedy. Decide which.
If it is a comedy, it is called: "Two Maids of Greece or, Love Stops a War."
If it is a tragedy, it is called: "Antigone and Ismene."
If it is a comedy, gently elide all direct aspects of incest (i.e. if Antigone and Polyneices are still brother and sister, she must end up with Haemon). Everyone gets married at the end.
If it's a tragedy, everyone dies at the end.
Working from the events of your previous play, work out a rough script in three acts. The basics should remain: the city of Thebes is under siege by Polynieces, who may or may not be its rightful ruler. Inside, Antigone and Ismene are trying to figure out what to do about it.
Act one: Introduce complications
Act two: Escalate tension
Act three: In comedy, resolve. In tragedy, die.
For each act, just sketch out a rough idea of what happens. Three or four sentences should do it. For acts one and two, pick at least one item from the lists below. For act three, just follow the directions above.
Comedy, act one:
Someone who has forsworn men / women.
Cross dressing
A stubborn, obstinate father
An older, inappropriate suitor
Comedy, act two:
Cross-dressing
An apparently inappropriate attraction
Shepherds
Identity confusion
Tragedy, act one:
Prophecy
An ill-advised oath
Murder
A ghost
Tragedy, act two:
Everything seems to be going to plan
The hero seems untouchable
Inappropriate sex
Murder
Ben Lehman:
Play: Once you've laid out the basic scripting, draw up a cast, assign characters, and play out one scene from each act, plus the final scene.
It may behoove you to have a director, who calls the shots and allows for reinterpretations.
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--Ben
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