Eidolon: the Dreamscape Opera

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David Berg:
Looks nice!  What are you looking for feedback on?

Morningstar:
In about a day or so, I'm going to upload some of the "in-game" magic systems. I'll be wanting feedback from people about whether it comes across too confusing or whether it works. I'm just tidying up a note or two.

Morningstar:
A post-mortem of how Eidolon came to be: http://eidolon.me/history.htm

Morningstar:
http://www.eidolon.me/files/Actor.pdf

I'm interested in hearing from people whether they like the simplicity and balance of this chapter layout. Note it is a two-page spread.

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