Hi all,
The article I wrote about My Life with Master for Second Person: Role-Playing and Story in Games and Playable Media (http://mitpress.mit.edu/0262083566) (MIT Press, 2007) is now up (http://www.electronicbookreview.com/thread/firstperson/protagonism) at the Electronic Book Review. It's an actively edited site, so your ripostes should be sent to editors@electronicbookreview.com.
I honestly didn't expect the articles from other RPG designers (Will Hindmarch, Rebecca Borgstrom, etc.) would be so expansive compared to my own when I submitted it, so I'd be quite glad to see you take this as an opportunity to expand on me, if you're so inclined.
Paul